The Luckiest Guy (part 3)

by Goran Rahim   Sep 25, 2006


Dear the luckiest guy in the world
Hello, How are you today
Sorry for bothering you again
Still I have some more to say.

How you treating my princess
Are you making her smile?
I hope she still have the magic beam
That I have not seen for awhile.

There was a day when
she never knew who you are
Look at destiny's game
You took her away so far.

Last night in my dream
She was still the same
She gazed into my eyes
But never said my name

I hope you gave her much love
That is why she forgot me
I wish she is the happiest
That is what I hope to see

You are the luckiest guy
As she is in your arms
When she silently forgot my name
Then what should be my charms

please do not judge this poem If you have not read part one and two, tnx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emily E Mehigan

    Still holds my interest. Great job.<3Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    This is really neat how this is like a story, I'm excited to read the others.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I loved this stanza it is so sad, and so meaningful. Amazing, absolutely amazing. I mean I dont know what else to say every poem gets better but every poem has all similar strengths well done

    Last night in my dream
    She was still the same
    She gazed into my eyes
    But never said my name

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Once again.
    it's just pure awesomeness

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this one two but the last two lines kind of threw me off im not exactally sure if they fit properly. The beginning is wonderful though "sorry for bothering you again" I liked it cause it gives the impression of a letter or a discussion with someone and thats part of what makes these annomous (sp?) letters to an unknown person just so amazing. keep up the good work.

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