Wow..cool poem..this part is as good as the other 2! i liked it alot..it flowed well...and the ending was very good!
But my fav part was this pne:
Last night in my dream
She was still the same
She gazed into my eyes
But never said my name
5/5 Keep it Up!
Keep SMiling

-*-Tormented

I liked part two much better...for some reason i believe it was better...not that this in not good...i loved it.......u know i always love your poem..but there was few gramer mistakes and there wasn't as much emotion behind those word like part 2...just few lines needs a little work...thats all..but most of it is perfect....and u know wat i think
that u still do care

Awesome work, man. I really like the idea for this one, surprised I never thought of that.

And holy cow, are there so many people who will read this and be like "wow, I know exactly how this guy feels", and that is the goal of every poem. Excellent.

As i said before, you are great at this, and just keep it up its brilliant!

AWW dude so much sweetness here and so much feelings i felt your words can split away every girls heart and yeah Im waiting for the part four lols

Great rhythm and flow such a true poem with a true feelings

Geneross

Now I'm more confuse than I was ever by reading your poems,on july 20th you wrote the greatest poem titled "the luckiest guy" in which you gave give out a great message

You are the luckiest guy
As her lips said she loves you
And here a hopeless guy is still waiting
To hear a word; Even if she says "I hate you"

that was great but after two month you added a second part, with the message that I recieved from reading
"I still love that girl" this was your point if I'm a good reader, but what is the reason of third part just days after second??
are you going to tell me or I have to find out myself?

I can really relate to the content of this sad but passionate poem

Goran who is the luckiest guy?? well i both read the part 1&2 and they are great poem.. hmmm anyway i cant wait to read the part 4 hehehe.. i really enjoyed and fact i like the way u write great job just keep on writing 5/5

You need to work on your grammar to improve your sentence structure. Otherwise it could cut the flow to pieces and make the reader stumble.
Othan than that it does have potential.

Dear goran,

before i write something about this poem, i would like to tell u something. u were a good poet when u wrote your first poem on this site. u became a better one when you wrote the luckiest guy part 1 and tempted me to add you to my favourites. you became the best one when you wrote the luckiest guy part 2. u ripped my heart apart when u wrote part 2. you proved your mettle through part 2.

now comes part 3. i just read a couple of stanzas. sorry to say but i felt this poem was getting monotonous. get out of this poem dear. why are you demoting your standard? i m sure u can write better ones too. stop this luckiest guy!

Wow, these set of poems are just a little scary to me. Not because they are bad becasue I could relate to them in a way almost identical. I've been trying to make a poem like this for awhile, but this puts the words right in my mouth. I couldn't write it better myself. I know how it feels...it sucks.

Great poems goran, 5/5 on all of them.

Goran, you are a master at love poetry. You have such a geniune heart, you must woo a lot of ladies, but I bet your heart belongs to one?.. very nice writing my friend, keep up the great work

Awesome!!!!!!!!!

I really don't have anything to say to this poem except that it's wonderful. You make me speechless sometimes and that is kind of hard for anyone to do. lol 5/5

Keep up the wonderful work Goran

Love
Letty

Good job. 5/5

Wonderful!
All I can really say.
You've done an amazing job as a poet!
God Bless 5/5
I admire your work.

~tay~

You are an amazing poet...I have loved all your poems and probably always will :)

Ahh, this was the best of the three i have read so far, this one flowed much for naturally, and had very clear ideas. Great work.

--Steph

These r so sad, its clear the character wants this princess more than anything, its hartbreaking that she doesnt even know.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Awwww I loved the second stanza this poem actually made me cry...I'm a softy but this hit me hard...I loved it nice job 5/5