So far so good lol I loved them, getting better and better!

I really liked this one two but the last two lines kind of threw me off im not exactally sure if they fit properly. The beginning is wonderful though "sorry for bothering you again" I liked it cause it gives the impression of a letter or a discussion with someone and thats part of what makes these annomous (sp?) letters to an unknown person just so amazing. keep up the good work.

Once again.
it's just pure awesomeness

I loved this stanza it is so sad, and so meaningful. Amazing, absolutely amazing. I mean I dont know what else to say every poem gets better but every poem has all similar strengths well done

Last night in my dream
She was still the same
She gazed into my eyes
But never said my name

This is really neat how this is like a story, I'm excited to read the others.

~*Alex*~

Still holds my interest. Great job.<3Emily