by Asingletear Sep 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Looking in to the mirror |
Nice. its very descriptive, which is cool. it could do wtih a bit more poem-ish-ness, but it gets a msg across to the reader, which is what poetry is really all about. good job |
Thats a great poem. The others are right, your a great writer!! 5/5!! Really strong words! Keep up the gr8 work! |
You Frock ( in case your don't understand my language it means freaking rock) lol cant wait to read more of your stuff . you can right i dont know what you are talking about in you bio. |
Hey such a sad poem. in your bio, you said your not that good, i totally disagree, you should take that part of! |
by Amber Parker
This poem is really good. It's not very rythm-y, but the emotions carry it through. I hope to read more from you soon ;) |