This poem is really good. It's not very rythm-y, but the emotions carry it through. I hope to read more from you soon ;)

~Scarlett

Hey such a sad poem. in your bio, you said your not that good, i totally disagree, you should take that part of!
well done, great poem, 5/5
love Mel

You Frock ( in case your don't understand my language it means freaking rock) lol cant wait to read more of your stuff . you can right i dont know what you are talking about in you bio.

Thats a great poem. The others are right, your a great writer!! 5/5!! Really strong words! Keep up the gr8 work!

Nice. its very descriptive, which is cool. it could do wtih a bit more poem-ish-ness, but it gets a msg across to the reader, which is what poetry is really all about. good job