by sibyllene Sep 25, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Our shadows tossed |
Loved the flow and imagery of this. Seemed to fit together very well. |
by Whitey
Nice work, short and creative, nice use of words, the way to composed this piece kept the ball rolling from beginning to end, and i too also like |
That was very creative, and I loved it. It really hit me with the star-strewn sky. That line was perfect. Keep it up Darling. 5/5 =]] |