That was very creative, and I loved it. It really hit me with the star-strewn sky. That line was perfect. Keep it up Darling. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

Nice work, short and creative, nice use of words, the way to composed this piece kept the ball rolling from beginning to end, and i too also like

'star-strewn sky'

This is a very inspriational poem, thank you for the nice read. Keep it up buddy, Cheers

Loved the flow and imagery of this. Seemed to fit together very well.

Great job on this one.

Peace and happiness
Jeannie