by LockedInEternity Sep 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Listen to your heartache. |
Omg. this is my new favorite poem.. ever! this was so awesome. just what every girl is longing for. thank you for sharing this hun. |
by Mousie
I love it, great job again! 5/5 |
Aww... i love this its soo cute.. and i had to problem getting through it.. i mean wow.. its tryely spectacular .. the flow and the rhyme are perfect.. its sweet and i love how you reapeat in the end and beging of the poem |
by e LIZ a beth
I love how you repeated the last line in the first stanza in the last line of the last stanza. it was simply amazing!! i love this poem. it made me smile a huge smile when i read it. fantastic job. PERFECT!!!! 5/5 |
by Jenni
This is definately my favorite of yours. i thought it told such a lovely little love story. great job. the flow was wonderful and the story was better. 5/5 |