Comments : How long will it last?

  • 18 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    A perfect example that poems aren't only about rhymes accidentally forming words... but though it doesn't rhyme..and though its a free verse... the writer can still place the rhythm in it... making it truthful and just express your feelings,... this is great steven...

    -bugs-

  • 18 years ago

    by perfectly unperfect

    I loved it keep it up it is great