No words to explain this sorrow

Oh wow. i wrote this the day we broke up. my dad told me to write and let everything out and that it would make me feel better...it didnt, but i ended up with a pretty good piece of writing. when i was writing this, i remember that i couldnt breathe and i thought, "i'm dying, he was my life support and now that he's gone, im finally dying." deep i know, but still, im still not able to comprehend why i couldnt breathe...i was crying, but not hard enough to make it hard to breathe. weird huh. leave the love.

This poem was really good...i can feel your pain...this poem brings up memories of my past...very good poem 5/5.. keep writing~! ooh ya by the way... im the totaly the same way i need to write my feelings down on paper to.. i can tell that is how you are by the way you write!!!

I really enjoyed this. I feel all upset and emotional inside just by reading it. good job. it is good to write whenever something happens that means a lot to you. It gets it all out and you learn to accept how you feel and not deny it or shove it aside. nice job. Jpoet*

Wow ...i love this poem...yea thx for the comment you left me..i had a recent brake up too..... we were together for a long time and i am trying my best to get over him but it is hard for me too...i understand what you are going through!!
i have a new peom its called nothing can change that i think that you will like it. it will be listed under love poems then lost love....
-brittany