Wow ...i love this poem...yea thx for the comment you left me..i had a recent brake up too..... we were together for a long time and i am trying my best to get over him but it is hard for me too...i understand what you are going through!!
i have a new peom its called nothing can change that i think that you will like it. it will be listed under love poems then lost love....
-brittany

I really enjoyed this. I feel all upset and emotional inside just by reading it. good job. it is good to write whenever something happens that means a lot to you. It gets it all out and you learn to accept how you feel and not deny it or shove it aside. nice job. Jpoet*

This poem was really good...i can feel your pain...this poem brings up memories of my past...very good poem 5/5.. keep writing~! ooh ya by the way... im the totaly the same way i need to write my feelings down on paper to.. i can tell that is how you are by the way you write!!!

Oh wow. i wrote this the day we broke up. my dad told me to write and let everything out and that it would make me feel better...it didnt, but i ended up with a pretty good piece of writing. when i was writing this, i remember that i couldnt breathe and i thought, "i'm dying, he was my life support and now that he's gone, im finally dying." deep i know, but still, im still not able to comprehend why i couldnt breathe...i was crying, but not hard enough to make it hard to breathe. weird huh. leave the love.