Comments : Temptation

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, it hav a strong meaning. very deep. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Golly, I loved it. The middle part kind of threw me off, I don't know why but it did but then you pulled me right back in with the ending. It was very powerful and I loved the conception that you used of her being her own worst enemy type thing. I love it.

    5/5

    -Jenna.