by Vanessa Lea Sep 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
While you're in love with her |
by Brooke Amity
This is so fantastic! |
by LadyPearl
Nice clean straight to the point poem. Great rhythm too! You may want to check your spelling again...just a minor thing. Thanks for reading my poem. |
So heart wrenching when you have to see someone you care about with someone else. |
Very sad :( but you wrote it so beautifully! :) great job 5/5 |