Aww. I loved it.
Very very good.

Sad.
I gave a 5.5

Excellent.

xx.NothingGold.xx

That was very touching. i dread the day i have to see my grandpa in the hospital. 5/5

I am so sorry! i know how it feels to lose someone! even if you guys weren't close you still have every right to love him! well e-mail me sometime at ceci_shelton@yahoo.com

love always, ceci

Excelent poem!! its so sad!! and almost made me cry..but Great wording and keep it up..your doing wonderful!!