by LovinMyLife
Wow, you're good. I like reading your poems. Please check out mine and tell me what you think, kk? thanks |
by Gem
What a powerful poem |
by Whitey
Great poem, a clear and distinct image can be created in the mind of any responder, the language that uve used is great, read it a few times and yeh, 5 outta 5 from me buddy, keep up the work , cheers |
by Lonely Ghost
Wow man talk about being skiled |
by sibyllene
I'm confused.... : ( I have to read it again |
Absolutly fuking beautiful.. |
by ACSweetie
I really loved your poem it was really good and well written. |
WOW! i love this one...the only thing is the last 2 verses the rhymes werent very together like they were in the previous verses...but i dont care it was an excellent write....5/5 |
by Tara Kay
You are very talented, a great poem with a great meaning. it was really good, very sad and very strong and emotional. keep it up |
by Katie
Took me a little while to read this one, but it was worth it. You have such great detail in your poems. I love that about them. |
by N M Lambert
This is an amazing poem, really well written and a great yet tragic story. 5/5 x |
by Oscar
Excellent poem, it was well written and had a good story to back it up. it flowed well and kept the reader interested. 5/5 |
by aDORKable x3
It was a very emotional write...great job! Ciao xx |