The message of this poem is good....though some lines are long and short i truly appreciate it and i understand what this poem express u goo job! i believe u have the talent to show w/us so just keep it up

god bless

Awhh, that was great.. I loved the words you used and the emotion was very powerful.. The only thing that I would advise is to try and keep all your lines the same length.. This would make it much easier to read.. Very sweet, I liked it.. Nice job 5/5

This was a really good poem! I loved the feelings you put into it. The emotions were very clear and I understood what you were feeling like it was I who was feeling that way. Though, like Jessy said, the only thing I would be careful of is making sure your lines are all approximately the same length. Other than that, great poem and keep writing!
5/5

Another great write.
Loved the flow in this one.
Short && Too the point.
I loved how cute it was.
Well done.x

Wow..i love short poems with tonnes of emotion, and this one was really good..5/5...one thing i don't get is that "number 10" part...maybe it should be "number 1"...but okay, thats up to you:)

Nice poem, very greatly written, keep up the great job, a 5/5 from me.

Excellent. 5/5 you deserve no less. You rhyming that you put, it flowed smoothly with the poem, story of the poem- excellent. my favorite part is:

At times I feel you're hooked to me just like a ball and chain,
You can't subdue your feelings I know they are driving you insane.

Great Job! 5/5

This is a wonderful poem! You give the description of a very wonderful friendship. This was an excellent write and your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Hugs
Letty

A good piece of work. I like the style and wording, you hav talent, although I do see much more potential in the way you write.
Keep 'em coming
Ash

This poem shows true friendship and i give it a 5/5

Again...wow. You have a lot of talent.