I dont know why this one has a 1 rating,It deserves more
For the nice choice of words, the mysterious ,dark side of it which makes it interesting.
5/5

This poem is... exquisite! I don't remember the last time a poem sobered me up (figuratively) this much! Oh, the imagery was beautiful, in a dark, ghastly way. And can I talk more about the imagery? The picture you described sent shivers down my spine. Bravo.

Aken Sol

Wow.. this is an amazing poem. It was very dark. You described everything very well. I loved it! Great job on this! 5/5