Waiting

by Gem   Sep 26, 2006


Standing outside the corner shop
Dreaming of your touch
Wishing you were here with me
I'm missing you so much

Its never been this bad before
I've never felt like this
A point where its unbearable
And I'm dying for your kiss

No ones has this effect on me
Its something new I feel
Cos every little thing you do
Flip my heart head over heels

I'm actually feeling sick
God, I'm missing you like mad
I close my eyes and reminisce
Over the last hug we had

I'm counting down the seconds
Staying patient is so tough
You've been in the shop five minutes now
For Gods sake, hurry up! ©

*Gem*

(I wasn't sure where to put this, but since of the twist at the end, i thought it would be better here RR&R if you please x)

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  • 18 years ago

    by SomeonesAngel

    Absolutely brilliant lol you got a 5 from me...i know exactly how that feels lol...you worded it perfectly keep it up. -x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    All the time reading this I was thinking this doesn't go in this catagory... but then the end...LOL. Cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    HA! I LIKE THAT - NOT THE WAY I EXPECTED IT TO END! GREAT!

    kELLY

  • 18 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Haha tht iz awsum..i lykd al of it...it waz soo funy haha =P nice job wel dun!!!
    ^Hannah^

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I like it :)