by David Sep 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I can see it in your eyes, |
by NinjaGirl
Touching and inspiring 5/5 lovely, David, absolutely lovely |
Very nice lyrics, they make a beautifully sad poem and its very moving, 5/5 |
by Kalee
This is a really lovely but sad poem David. It really shows how much you care for her. It was really beautiful. 5/5 |
by Tammie
This is a sweet but somehow sad poem. It really shows how much you care for her. I enjoyed reading this, the style gave the meaning in this poem more effect. The flow was good, and the rhyming natural, with so much emotion. Well done. 5/5 |
Very good poem, except you spelled "baby" wrong. It is not spelled "babey" lmfao! |