Nice poem david good work. I can see maisy is really special to you

I think this was the most honest poem that you have written so far. and it was one of your earlier poems! i can just tell by your writing that everything in this poem is true. wonderful poem! 5/5

Wow I loved this it had me wanting more at the end you did a very nice job!

Very good poem, except you spelled "baby" wrong. It is not spelled "babey" lmfao!
Great job, and it's nice to see someone is in love :)

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~Stephen White

This is a sweet but somehow sad poem. It really shows how much you care for her. I enjoyed reading this, the style gave the meaning in this poem more effect. The flow was good, and the rhyming natural, with so much emotion. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

This is a really lovely but sad poem David. It really shows how much you care for her. It was really beautiful. 5/5

Kalee

Very nice lyrics, they make a beautifully sad poem and its very moving, 5/5

Touching and inspiring 5/5 lovely, David, absolutely lovely