These words are very sad to read at.
Sorry.
Dont lose hope.Everythings gonna be alright soon.

Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

God Bless!

This was a great first poem. check up on your rhyme scheme a little, but other than that...GREAT job nice poem. really enjoyed it! Jpoet*

Hey great peom, its so sad!
well done, love mel

Great poem 5/5. reminds me of a book called Basterd out of carolina. good book