I agree with Never Trust Again. It is a really good poem, just clean it up a bit and it will make it that much better. Very nice job. =] Keep it up.

How sad! I know just how you feel! But maybe not the same as you. Aww, this is sad

Love Niquee

Hey hun, i really like your poems, especially this one, really felt it. and to answer your comment no course i didn't kill him [lol], if you read my biog you'll see the history behind it... much love xx

This may be personal but have you really ever tried suicide?