Thanks for replying!

I have to say i think this works really well. I understand much better about the other poem through reading this. As a poem i think this is good but I don't really understand the line about 'tasting like lemons'.It also is much longer than the other lines and stands out quite a bit because of it.

I really like the 'stuck in my head | stuck in my dreams'. I think that is very good.

Jem

Now i understand about the lemons! It must be an odd experience to taste things not in your mouth. But i expect if you grow up with it no one would really feel its any different.

thanks. i wrote that a few days ago now and I'm not entirely sure where it came from. I just picked up a pen and that's what started to unravel. I guess it stems partially from the politics at the moment, the generaly attitude i see everyday in almost everyone. It's a sad prospect but it is what's happening. people are beginning to stop caring. I'm glad you thought it was good.

Wow. I'm sorry I made you cry!
I'm glad you like my poems and that you can understand them and relate to them. I would love to see my poems published but I really wouldn't know how to go about that.

That must have been so strange waking up with something so new and different that you've no choice but get used to.