I like the twist at the end

A fairly good write

John

Beautiful.

I feel your pain.

This is a poem that I would just love to give my ex!! Keep writing!!

I really like the way this poem ends. good job

Poems are really haed to write and express the way you feel but you have done it keep up the good work!!!!!!!!

Wowow
i liked how you had
"that was my mistake" every stanza
its awesomness =]