Original in its theme, which is always nice :)
the last sentence is well found
so overal it's just a very good ,nice to read poem
well done, keep it up :)

Thhis was my favourite by you!
Its a great idea and the rhyme was excellent.
I loved it all.
It was really a good poem!
^_^

Ya it's almost impossible to step on a plane without thinking, omg wihat if something goes wrong. Everybody has a fear of flying even if they dont admit it, because who knows what can go wrong. excellent poem and amazing flow, i felt like i was actually in the plane, but good thing i wasn't lol 5/5