Love is everything

by XfromwithinX   Sep 26, 2006


Love is something held in your heart,
love is something to keep,
for without that love your heart would be empty,
an empty heart doesn't beat,
with out a beating heart you die,
love is everything that keeps you alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I love these short poems. no messing around right to the point
    good work laura.

    whats up with you and al you are
    little hard on him. lol im kidding
    makes us try harder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Very rythmic, and ok structured, just my personal thought....you could alway fit in two or three extra lines in this poem, but thats up to you to diced...grt poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by katie

    I absolutely LOVE IT!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Oh lovey thank you for your comments on my poem I am sorry at your young age you feel so sad. Bless you

  • 18 years ago

    by Kellerman

    That is really good, and true keep up the good work

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