by Hey Brittknee Sep 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Lungs are icy, and holding tight |
by MyDevotion
WOW your poems are trully powerful =) I love it! I love your wording, its absolutely perfect for the theme! 5/5 excellent job! |
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. |
Love it first stanza gave me goosebumps :) |
by Christie
Wow, such a sad poem. i really like it. its touching and well written, each word seems perfectly chosen and placed. 5/5 |
by Nichole
Loved it |