Another gr8 poem. odd that this is true. good ending:)

Hey, such a sad poem, but i really like it, i especially like the last line "shes happy" its great. i love the way everything is contrasted, great poem, love mel

I loved it! It reminds me of myself for some reason. Everything described in this poem I could relate to, and that is probably why I liked it so much because I love reading poems that I can relate to and understand what the reader is trying to say. Good job.

5/5

-Jenna.