by LadyPearl Sep 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Resisting temptation under the scarlet sun |
by Zack O.o
I thought it was differant but i liked it, I like the incorperation of 2 line and 4 lines it made it more capturing becaus eof the varyation |
by BK Butterfly
I love it, it sweet! |
NOOOOO!NO!NO!NO!NO! it's not freestyle. to be sincere i really like the poem but i'ts not free style |
NOOOOO!NO!NO!NO!NO! it's not freestyle. to be sincere i really like the poem but i'ts not free style |
by Kate
I loved this poem it was very deep and meaninful i really liked the way you described things and the words that you used too excelent poem well done! 5/5 |