Cold Sun

by Chris Rodriguez   Sep 27, 2006


In my eyes
Come and see
Everything you don't want to be
As the sun pours it's cruel heat
It melts everything away

God is dead
My heart is lead
Just let me leave
But the truth will stay with me
It'll still be this way

Here I go
But I don't know
Is this just a waste of time?
Luck for me hasn't been so sweet
What will make it change now?

Sanity
Stay with me
Pain is just a state of mind
Heaven send hell away
And in purgatory I'll stay

Morning thoughts
Desperately
Try to bring me down
They change me into
Someone different everyday

Hang my head
Water rise
Close my eyes
And this will all just go away

Here comes the cold sun
To pull us all away

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  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    This is excellent! Especially when you get to the part "sanity stay with me"

    It paints a pretty sad picture, but a great one.. amazing work

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The wording was great, the portrayal was great....this is wonderful work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    Good job i love this and i think it is very well done good job and also thx for ur comment:D

    keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Gregory W Golden

    Excellent piece fo writing! This poem pulsates, as you read it. You included good imagery and good imagination. You should enter this poem in a national poetry contest, because I think its a winner! Keep writing and keep sharing. May the force be with, Luke Sky Walker! Rated 10/10. If you have time, please read some of my poetry.

    FireFly747

  • 18 years ago

    by Tawny

    Another good poem. it was very touching. keep it up. 5/5

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