by disturbed one Sep 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
This actually was supposed to be about a little boy and his dad leaving for the war but i didnt really get to incorporate it in. but i showed it to my friend and she read the 2nd/3rd verse and shes like i know what this is about and i asked her and shes like he went off to war...i was like...YAY!!! lol |
Alysia...lmao...ur not my friend :P |
by Jessie
What friend guessed he went to war? |
EE =) thanks |
by Megann Lee
Wow another well written poem. I liked this one, I thought you did a good job and I like how you never reallllly say he left for war, but by reading it you could get that's where he was going.. |