Very good job Alyssa, haha, you may think I'm deep at times but i'd say I'm a puddle compared to your ocean! This is im going to have to say, one of the most inspirational poems i've ever read, I love it! Please don't stop! I'd like to read more like it in the futur.

This is really good, its a story as well as a poem. Plus it's got a good message within it, Well done girl!

I have to agree with everyone, very deep poem and I definetely LOVED it, I only hope you keep writing. =)