Advice

by The Flame Within   Sep 27, 2006


The simple reaction of a decision can be as vital as a surgeon making an incision that has a simple vision to complete a mission

choices are our lives either it be made with soft skin and a sharp knife or that one decision to cheat on your wife, thats what defines life

its the rights and wrongs we break with every step we take and how we make it seem real when its fake

its interesting how the world crumbles and you hear Hell's rumble and everyone wonders why they stumble instead of realizing when they fumble to pick it up and recover but instead they curse and mumble instead of being humble

what happened when you could wave to a person in car as it passes by, instead they have guns out their windows, driving, not even asking why

pulling triggers, unsheathing knives, hurting each other destroying lives, how little kids are deprived because then didn't step aside when the bullet went live

just for once, stop and rethink the choices you choose, either its one to win or one to lose, if its the one were you are drinking booze well you go for a cruise

or the choice were you thought, and you brought a friend who taught you not to drink

so stop think ahead, instead of shooting an enemy in the head, or jumping in bed with someone who has so many sexual transmitted diseases its only a matter of time before they are dead

take my words hate them if you want, but you cant change the idea i have embedded in this font

so take care God bless, and follow my advice, before you make a wrong choice that will effect your life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brandon

    Speechless. I love the fact that you wrote sich a true poem. Ive felt that way for a long time, its nice to see someone put it to words

  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    OMGOSH!!!!! nick this is amazing!!!!!!! i love it!!!! great job!!! love you
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