Leave me alone

by cowgirlstar26   Sep 27, 2006


Plummet through the depths
rise among the ashes
keep staggering about
to fulfill your deepest wish

creep within the hearts
of so many unaware
scream in enjoyment
as you cause a night terror

invoke the silence
the silence that I speak
my crimson blood will flow
as you overcome the weak

speechless I see you
you circle all around
stalking me as your prey
naive, I look upon the ground

you gently touch my cheek
enticing with every breath
I succumb to you for a moment
thinking of words once said

murmuring, I cannot interpret
reaching my open ears
my skin crawls
unleashing its fears

my heart beats faster
blood pumping through my veins
you whisper to me
this is a temporary pain

exploding in anger
beauty from my fierce spirit
condemning you back
to the depths in which you came with

go back unto the pits
where hell forever holds you
In his precious name I command
SATAN YOU LOSE!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)

  • 18 years ago

    by emorco08

    Crimson is now my favorite word
    i loved this poem its nice and dark just the way i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Your first verse came off VERY strong and that really got me pumped. The body of the poem kept strong, and the ending was great. Overall this was a great poem. You really created such a descriptive image. The emotions were mixed, which explains it being under misc. So good stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is a great poem, but you should put it in the 'Dark Poems' catagory, I think that would be more fitting.

    Also, I thought the end could be a little bit more powerful, I like it the way it is, but I think that it would have more of an impact if it were something more elusive, which would cause the reader to have to think about what you mean and interpret your words.

    Great poem, 5/5 from me! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow, i love your choice of words! The ending is exceptionally powerful!!!

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