Short but sweet..

Only three lines yet so much imagery in them, wonderful!

Ha, as I clicked on to it, this really intense rock tune came on my radio.. so there was this serene poem all beautiful and pretty with rock music playing.. I can't say they suited each other... But you never know!

Well done on this luanne, Fantastic work!

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Simple, yet straight to the point. You
know that your an excellent poet when
can take three lines of words and tell a
whole story. Bravo! Congradulation on such a wonderful poem. 5/5

Letty

Oh wow, Luanne. Perfectly worded haiku... So beautiful!