Time will Mend A Heart of Glass

by Lu   Sep 27, 2006


Object Contest :
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=58083
My chosen object .....glass

Time will Mend a Heart of Glass

A victim rests unknowingly as prey
as the misleading lips of a
venomous snake slurs
glass words of love
emotional impact
shatters a fragile heart
creating deeply slashed scars
eyes bleed from wounds of deceit

Digging a grave of hopeless tears
little shards of broken glass
torture a precious heart
stealing our dignity
finally, we realize
we do deserve true love
rain of tears begins to subside
winds change, shattered heart heals

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really really liked this poem. What a great way to discribe the heart like that of glass. Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Wow, this is truly wonderful. such amazing imagery, it really touches the heart, the language is very beautiful and it creates a mysterious tone which, along with the slow pace, really gets the reader thinking. excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Magnificent arrays of words, that makes me want to read it over and over again.
    The structure very unique also.
    A very good read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mary

    Very Descriptive and Well Written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely done my friend. Beautiful job. The healing heart at the end an indication of your nature and optimism about love. Wonderful insight.

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