An Angel..

by Mark   Sep 27, 2006


An Angel in my heart,
One that will never part,
I will always need to be able to live,
An Angel who always forgives.

A definite change you brought to me,
Making me happier, can't you see?
You always make me smile, even when I'm down,
The smile was once a very depressing frown.

Angels bring miracles to everyones lives,
They make people happy, as more people survive.
Everyone has an Angel, it just takes time to find them,
Like in a mine, when you find your favorite gem.

Digging for hours, weeks or even months,
Finding nothing at all for so long,
You finally find your gem right there,
You will no longer have to live in despair.

Your Angel you find has known you years,
They save you from shedding tears.
My Angel makes me feel great and makes me smile,
My Angel makes my heart run a mile.

It took me 15 years to see my Angel appear,
And now I see you, so very clear.
The wings on your back, the tiara over your head,
All those times I could have been dead..

You always come to me, and save me from death,
You always take away my breath.
I wish I could hold, and touch you knowing you're there,
Not thinking you are only in the air.

To hug, to kiss, to always rely on,
You'll always be the one I shall look upon.
There are three words I wish to share,
But I fear you'll never be there.

If you are, or if you're not,
I will give you the lot,
I just wish to say, I'm glad you knew,
And that I have said, that.. I love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a really sweet poem. But it seems to me that you have focused a little to much on the ryhming instead of the meaning of the poem itself. Don't get me wrong you have some strong points, but all the consistant ryhming distracts the reader from the meaning. I enjoyed reading it and I hope that I have not offended you. The poem is a great Idea itself. You just need to let the words flow freely forget about the ryhming and this could be the perfect poem. 4/5

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! Mark Man!!

    This was beautifuuuuuuuul!

    Who's it bout, eh? Tell meeeee! ;P

    Very nicely done though. Seems like everyone's in love these days. Even me :O! Not really. Well, kinda. Eh, I dunno. Lmao. Keep it up! & Stop having hangoverrrrs.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    Mark,

    That is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. You put so much feeling and emotion into it.

    I wish I could give it higher than 5!