by Mark Sep 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
An Angel in my heart, |
by Letty
This is a really sweet poem. But it seems to me that you have focused a little to much on the ryhming instead of the meaning of the poem itself. Don't get me wrong you have some strong points, but all the consistant ryhming distracts the reader from the meaning. I enjoyed reading it and I hope that I have not offended you. The poem is a great Idea itself. You just need to let the words flow freely forget about the ryhming and this could be the perfect poem. 4/5 |
by Natalie
Awh! Mark Man!! |
by HumanAngel
Mark, |