Mark,

That is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. You put so much feeling and emotion into it.

I wish I could give it higher than 5!

Awh! Mark Man!!

This was beautifuuuuuuuul!

Who's it bout, eh? Tell meeeee! ;P

Very nicely done though. Seems like everyone's in love these days. Even me :O! Not really. Well, kinda. Eh, I dunno. Lmao. Keep it up! & Stop having hangoverrrrs.

Natalie``

This is a really sweet poem. But it seems to me that you have focused a little to much on the ryhming instead of the meaning of the poem itself. Don't get me wrong you have some strong points, but all the consistant ryhming distracts the reader from the meaning. I enjoyed reading it and I hope that I have not offended you. The poem is a great Idea itself. You just need to let the words flow freely forget about the ryhming and this could be the perfect poem. 4/5

Letty