Sorrow.

Wow very powerful writing. Keep it up, you have a way with passion, I like it.
Always-
Shattered and Broken

Wow deep but i like it a lot =]. keep it up!! =]

This was so sad.
I liked the imagery and I thought the wording and flow were good.
I think it should go in dark because of the type of imagery you used, but apart from that, excellent!

Hey, well done, its def better than mine! great job, love mel

I love it.