Numbness

by Robert Spence   Sep 27, 2006


Numbness, feelings I cant overcome,
A number of things I have said and have done,
Children playing, couples skating,
I still feel nothing, excruciating.

An endless stream of empty blood,
A wordless novel, a heart of mud,
A transparent window and a blank reflection,
An eternal dessert of absent affection.

A world full of hate and I long to cry,
Long to love and long to die,
I need help, somebody please help me try,

I still feel numbness, and dont know why.

(C) Robert Spence

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  • 18 years ago

    by gabbyblueskies

    Wow! ok it took my breath away.

    "An endless stream of empty blood,
    A wordless novel, a heart of mud"

    it's beautiful in it's own dark way. keep it up rob ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    A transparent window and a blank reflection,
    An eternal dessert of absent affection.

    Loved those lines. This poem is teetering on the edge of dark poetry.

    Great write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    Thx 4 the comment. luv this piece
    andi

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Excellent poem.. The rhythm and flow were superb.. well done 5/5 xx

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