It's hard sometimes writting things like these. Nice job anyway. I espiecially liked the ending.

Nice poem of war...
ya this is what is happening in the middle east...
it is true... and it is sad...
its a nice poem!
keep it up!

Donno what else to say!

This is very sad. It is ashame that this kind of hatred exists in the world...Oh, I wish I had a magic wand........