Short and sweet. maybe "so i will love anouth" would suit more. a really nice example of poetry. keep writing
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shadow dancer (ruby)

Really felt touched by this, love your quotes as well- they're true to the bone!!!xx

Aww this is so sweet . Btw I♥yher quotes .
Thanks so much for the comments (: I appreciate itt .
..__MiNDYY

I felt really touched by this poem...it was sweet...please comment and rate my poems...thanks ~DARK~

Since you commented my poem ill comment yours.

this is very good, keep it up =D

This was beautifully written.
So short and yet filled with so much emotion.
Wonderful work.

Somuch feelingconveyed in the last line and also so prophetic to others. Nice job

Very Great Worth Reading 5/5