Good poem luv, keep it up!!

--ally

Aww sweetie i like :) 5/5 it has all the emotion im looking for :)

This one is sad :( but chin up kiddo, stiffen that upper lip :)) you have me here to make you smile another day :)

"waiting for that day
this disastrous body
will fall to an end"

i love that. this is a really good poem, you have to think to understand it, but once you do it works on so many levels.

thanks for the comment.

-lonelynow xxx