Complete With You

by Andi   Sep 27, 2006


I want you,
right here with me,
forever and ever,
never to ever part.

because you are my only,
love in this world,
and i will love you,
till the sun doesn't rise.

and i promise you baby,
to always be true,
if i ever lost you,
I'd lose myself to.

because you are my sun,
and my stars at night,
your my pride,
and my whole entire life.

i will never deny my love for you,
even when we're through,
because i love you for always,
and even more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by hislover

    That is so sweet!!! and it reminds me of how i feel about my b/f john!!! keep writing ur really good !!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Aww cool! but sad. 5/5 from me good work!

    thanks for commenting on mine X

  • 18 years ago

    by Raydeen

    Wow, I love that. keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    Heya i liked this poem coz it was really meaningful. i liked this verse best:

    "because you are my sun,
    and my stars at night,
    your my pride,
    and my whole entire life" There's a wee mistake though when you should have put too but only put to. :p

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Aww it was really good!! its sweet and meaingful....thanxz for the comment

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