Thanx what happened b/t u 2? yeah I hurt my boyfriend pretty bad and now he doesn't want anything to do with me. It hurts real bad.

Aww it was really good!! its sweet and meaingful....thanxz for the comment

Heya i liked this poem coz it was really meaningful. i liked this verse best:

"because you are my sun,
and my stars at night,
your my pride,
and my whole entire life" There's a wee mistake though when you should have put too but only put to. :p

Wow, I love that. keep up the good work.

Aww cool! but sad. 5/5 from me good work!

thanks for commenting on mine X

That is so sweet!!! and it reminds me of how i feel about my b/f john!!! keep writing ur really good !!!