This is a great poem Allison.

I can feel the sadness (I know how those airport tears feel!!)

Just a couple suggestions to make this poem perfet:

1. "That you hate in when I cry" (in should be it)

2. And your words can't stop (I think it might sound better if you either take out the "and" or change it to "But"

3. "tyrant" - I think the word you are wanting is "torrent"

Great work!