Comments : 365 days

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Really liked this poem. you did a great job! Loved it. One small, small suggestion...to help the rhyme scheme
    I used to be able to just call her,
    didn't matter what day or what time.

    take out hte word what after the word or...
    nothing big, just something I've been doing in my poems too. GREAT JOB! 5/5 Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Aww, this poem is great, it reminds me of my friend who moved far away, we haven't spoken in 5 yrs :( its hard but we'll always be friends, I might be moving down to where she is so things will get better, it just takes time :) if you need to talk, email me

    Much love
    Angel