Stalker

by Katlyn   Sep 28, 2006


All alone
Dead as night
I wait there til
The time is right.
To begin the hunt
And stalk my prey
Wait for dawn
So I can hide away.
A teenage girl
Walking all alone
Down an alley
I watch her go.
Close behind
Walking near
But not to be seen
I grab her arms
And bite her neck
And listen for
The very last breath
There she lay
On the cold hard ground
And I wonder if
She ever did wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Woah... thats really dark.
    Well done on this one hun, it seems to be set apart from your other poems, but in a good way.
    It's a good dark poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I like this one... :) it's really good written and good language usage...

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by steffff

    This is very good. great idea. keep up the good work. :-]

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is so awesome. It's amazing how great a picture you painted with so little words. It's kind of chilling and very... I don't know. It rocks.

    Write more soon! ;)

    {{If you like, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}}

    ~Scarlett

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