by Melissa
Sad, dark, and beautiful. Excellent wording throughout... |
Wonderully penned Kim!!! |
by Bill Turner
Incredible poem. The last two lines really bring it together nicely. |
by steffff
Wonderful poem. great write. |
by N M Lambert
Sad but blew me away... your words are stunning and chilling xx |
by SSSAAMMMYY
Wow great job your a talented poet |
Short, sweet, and to the point. I really felt emotion in this poem. I like the way it flows. |