Comments : Silver Shadows

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Sad, dark, and beautiful. Excellent wording throughout...

    "Shadows wash the earth
    Leaving a grey imprint upon
    The adhesive edges of
    Tormented souls"
    ^^^ Love these lines, nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderully penned Kim!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Incredible poem. The last two lines really bring it together nicely.

  • 18 years ago

    by steffff

    Wonderful poem. great write.
    :-]

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Sad but blew me away... your words are stunning and chilling xx

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Wow great job your a talented poet

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke Thompson

    Short, sweet, and to the point. I really felt emotion in this poem. I like the way it flows.