Comments : Little and twinkle

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Sowing stars in night skies
    little and twinkle shine

    she wept little by little for nights sorrows

    sowing stars in night skies
    twinkle and little (spring, moon and autumn)
    - these are my favorite lines but the entire poem was very good...fantastic job :) :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is really interesting. It took me back to
    some olden times of a maiden and knight..

    "sowing stars in night skies"
    liked this line and enjoyed reading it as well :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    It seems the line I liked the most is one all the ladies liked lol. We are a sucker for the knight in shinning armor and the protection he brings.
    Excellent love poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    Beautiful poem. I find a poem is great when it makes u need to keep reading. Fantastic job.

  • 13 years ago

    by SkYler BabIe for EvEr andAlways

    It was so fantastic it made me feel up lifting